User blog:Corbus/Submission and Rebellion Reboot

Coinciding with all the other reboots I have decided to do a reboot of my second and most popular RPG. Submission and rebellion. For those who were in it before I ask that you try a different character(Though you may enter the same one) to see how the story changes this time around.As for those who are new to this just read the context below:

The Praetorian army has reached the fringes of Mossflower. Promising peace and unification they have gained the support of many creatures, both woodlander and vermin. But beneath their surface lies corruption, screams in the night unheard, nay-sayers slain by superiors. Will you join their cause or reveal their twisted leader for who he is?

The Rules
1) no invincibility! I think most people understand this. But with that being said you don't have to die.(when fighting someone leave them an out unless they are fine with dying)

2)All the normal rules apply(no swearing, personal insults, etc.)

3)maybe 3 characters max. I am still not sure of the exact number I want. This was originally 1 but I know I cannot make a good RPG with only 1 character. Also I have some ideas for Commodus' royal guard.

4)no wolves. No offence to people that like them, I just don't think they belong in Redwall. Too big.(I may give an exception if you can convince me of it)

5)DON'T JUST MAKE A COMMENT THAT SAYS "I THINK I MIGHT JOIN THIS" IF YOU DON'T HAVE A CHARACTER YET SPEND THIS TIME TO THINK OF ONE.

4) No foreign language that is not in the least bit phonetic, and even then you must provide a translation and what language it is(Thorn I am looking at you) Put the translation in bold

Please this on my talk page when you have filled it out. otherwise I will not be able to add it for about an hour.

Character sheet
Name:

Species:

Gender:

Weapon:

Personality:

Appearance:

History:

Also either try to word in or tell me what side they are on.

Add on if I have forgotten anything

Commodus
Species:Badger

Gender:Male

Weapon:Bow and crescent shaped arrows. Javelin

Personality: Paranoid and extremely proud of his skill in archery.

Appearance: Purple fringed clothes with light metal armour

History:Inherited the role of leader. At the age of 19 he was almost killed in an assassination attempt and has since then been extremely paranoid. He recently began to expand the territory of his tribe, easily convincing several others to join him after making promises of uniting them together in peace. He has a young son named Trajan, who is next in line to be emperor

Pertinax
Gender: Male

Species: Otter

Weapon:Gladus and large square shield

Appearance:Long dark fur.Has a long scar along his right arm, yet never reveals its origins. Usually wears the ornate imperial armour denoting his rank. Green eyes

Personality: Kind and usually cheerful, devoted, noble, quite smart, very virtuous.

History:Originally part of a Holt in the far south, the Praetorians saved him when his Holt was attacked by corsairs. Over the seasons he grew in rank and reputation until one day he was given the honour of being Commodus's personal guard alongside Claudius.

Claudius
Gender:Male

Species: Weasel

Weapon: Noose and mace

Appearance: Silvery-white fur with pale blue eyes. usually wears a regal red cape and eagle talon around his neck.

Personality: a golden tongue, uses this to his advantage as his patrol is the largest in the army due to his skills of recruitment. Yet under his charming and charismatic surface he is evil and corrupted. He enjoys the darker side of his job more than anybeast should.

History:Born in the heart of the Praetorian tribe he was of royal blood. His ancestors were the original rulers of the army but were overthrown as being corrupt and ruthless rulers, he has given the facade of kindness and charm to gain a lofty position in the army as the personal bodyguard of Commodus. He has always hidden the darker side of the empire from Pertinax as he knew he would not stand for them with his morals.