User blog comment:Wedgeback/Titanic and Redwall/@comment-11162599-20131201205104

Wedge: I think it needs a bit more to it. You need a bit of information to get people interested in it. For example, you could make it sound like the captian of the ship is talking to the reader and subtly fill in the reader on what the RP is about. For example, you could put in,

"Hullo, ol' chum! Welcome aboard The Titanic, the famous indestrucable ship! Where's my pay? Thissain't free you know. Well, I suppose if you don't have anything to give me, you could work aboard! This is a large vessle it is, and we can never have enough crew members. Just give me your name, age, occupation, and the like so that I know who you are! An' if you got me some pay, I'll still need your name, age, what you do around here, (occupation), your history, and the like. I don't want to sea scum aboard me pretty Titanic."

Or something of the like. Feel free to use that paragraph and add on to it, for example, add the wiki protocal in there, as if the captain was giving the ones aboard some guidelines on how to behave, where on the ship is available to passengers and stuff like that!