User blog comment:Skalarana/The Heartless/@comment-4677325-20130111030609/@comment-1956190-20130116003544

I was 11 when I wrote it, and now... I do NOT need criticism as my writing has improved drastically. If you would like to point out a few things when I actually put up the redone story then knock ur self out but at the moment this story is a very immature verson of an 11 year old's fantasies. :)