User blog comment:Holt 5/Convo Box 0.2/@comment-3094815-20110113082259

This is for Rawfan56 to copy if he wants it. It's some editing I did to OCAP, grammar, links etc

Hey, there my messmateys this is for us Pirates and Corsairs! This is kind of like Ferretmaiden's Corsairs of the high seas. You can create characters and must follow orders. Also, there are occupations. You can also be an oarslave. This is my first RPG. I will have a First Mate AND a Quartermaster. People can appear that are played by the one who asks, this isn't double Charactering. We can take more ships too by the way.

Rules
Follow the Protocol

Dont kill any other crewmates if you kill a crewmate you are hung and will not play this RPG again

Have fun!

Do what the cap'n says

Please put the character Form on my talkpage but if you must you can do it here

dont adjust the occupations to put you on it. I'll do it.

If you ask I might let you have more than one character but I doubt it

Occupations
Captain-Velvet

First Mate-Barktooth

Quartermaster-Bladetail

Cook-Open if you dont poison the food

Doctor-Crystal Shone

Armoury Keeper-

Carpenter- Shrapnel Toxin Jahk

Slaver-Cadbath Boru

Spy-Darksoul

Steersman-Russkan Burrjacket

Master Gunner-Gallil Mossberg

Warrior-Bloody Carnage Jack-This is an advisor to the captain too...

Lookout-Aerothorn Shadowbaen

Bodyguard-Crimson Vincent

Oarslaves

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The ship
Green Hammer

Characters
Bloody Carnage Jack

Species: Sea Mink

Nickname: Jack

Appearance: From the bridge of his nose to between his ears it a large bit of white, he is brown other than that, and he has a scar on his eye

Weapons: scimitar, twin stilletos with a silver hook on one side of each that's sharpened and it can be thrown, four sided hook good for hand to hand or for attaching to rope so it can throw

Personality: Mean and powerful

Occupation: Respected warrior

History: youngest of 20 kids and his mom died in childbirth, such his dad blames him, and tortures him, the last straw was his dad killing the only girl he ever liked

Age:21 seasons

Owned by-User:Rawfan56

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Name: Velvet

Species: Mink

Gender: Female

Appearance: Has shorter fur then a regular mink its color is a brownish auburn sort of gold color, wears a piece of black material over eyes and tied at back of head (she‘s blind) and wears a baggy dark brown shirt and a broad leather belt around waist with a copper buckle. Has two gold earrings in both ears, is covered in tattoos and scars, and now has a peg leg for left leg up to the knee.

Weapons: Two scimitars (one strapped over back and the other in belt) and a walking stick

Occupation: Captain of the Green Hammer

Name: Ruskkan Burrjacket

Species: Squirrel

Gender: Male

Appearance: Gray fur, wears a long-sleeved baggy, somewhat dirty white shirt, and a sharkskin belt around waist. Has a wide scar around neck that he tries to hide with the collar of shirt.

Weapons: Dagger, cutlass, bow and a quiver of arrows

Occupation: Steersbeast

Name: BladeTail

Gender: Female

Species: Weasel

Appearance: Chestnut fur with white underbelly and throat, one of her eyes are blue and the other is green. Her clothing is a blue trench-coat, a green sash, a red tricorn and a striped tunic underneath the trench-coat and she has a nose-ring.

Personality: Tricky, defiant at times, roguish, a joker, daring and cheerful most of the time.

Weapons: 5 daggers made to be thrown from the tail, 2 as stabbing daggers, 6 pocket daggers(hidden in the numerous pockets of her coat) and 5 daggers thrown by paw.

Occupation: Quartermaster

Name: Crimson Vincent

Species: Fox

Nickname: Has not been given one

Appearance: A skinny fox who wears a dark red robe that looks like a toga. Wears a silver earring. Has green eyes. His front left tooth is golden. The tips of his ear is black. The tip of his other ear is missing.

Weapons: Sabre, Bow and Arrows, Whip

Personality: Acts dumb to deceive everyone of his true nature. He is actually bright and can become violent if provoked.

Occupation: Bodyguard

History: Unknown, has a brother, but his name is unknown to the crew

Age: 23 seasons

Owned by- User:Bluestripe the Wild

Darksoul

Species: Ferret

Nickname: I wouldn't call her nicknames if i were you.

Appearance: Dark fur with black eyes.

Weapons: Broadswords

Personality: Headstrong, a little hot headed but not as much as Salm.

Occupation: Spy

History: Salm's best friend before she ran away. After her friend left she turned in to a pirate. Still has Salm in her heart and won't give up hope that she's still alive.

Age: 16

Owned by: User:Skalarana

Name:Aerothorn Shadowbaen

Gender:Male

Species:Mink

Weapons:three blades that come out of his arms from between his knuckles on his hands, two long, sword blades that exit his arms from the top of his wrist, a blades that exits from the tips of his fingers(like his claws), and a short blade that exits from his elbow facing backwards, two black longswords behind his back, a black longbow with black arrows, and two hidden blades on his vambraces

Appearance:Black hooded cloak, black tunic with muliple black leather wrapped over arms, black vambraces, steel chain mail tunic, two silver earrings in his left ear, two silver tail rings, and two gold arm rings on each arm, his eyes are red with snake like pupils

Age:Undetermined, though he is said to be older than the crew and ship's ages combined, it is rumered he had drank from the Fountain of Youth(or whatever it would be called in Redwall)

Backstory:He was born in an age long forgotten. He had the blades implanted into his arms against his will. After joining an underground group of assassins, he left after their rampaging holocausts got out of hand. After he left he was wondering through the desert and stumbled into a cave, where he had to fight a sidewinder. After defeating the snake he drank from a fountain in the back of the cave, he was 25 at this time and hasn't physicaly, or mentaly aged since.

Occupation:Lookout

And Now Gallil:

Name:Gallil Mossberg

Gender:Male

Species:Fox

Weapons:Katana, two sais, a primitave E-tool, and a baseball bat type club, plus a broadsword, a boarding ax and a ball and chain and dirk

Outfit:blood soaked headband(it is soaked with his Brother's blood, whom he knows lives, but had though was dead), clean black trench-coat, a dark gray shirt and a red, gold embroidered scarf which was given to him by another Fox Brood for helping defend them. He wears the scarf to cover a scar received from an arrow that went through his neck.

Back story:Twin older brother of Lock Uril-Galidur, he grew up in a Fox Brood, he left after his Brother was exiled, he wandered for a year before joining the Pheonix' crew, where he met Crystal, Salm, Velvet, Jack and Sharrk, after he left or the crew was destroyed(not yet determined)he wandered another 12 years searching for his loved ones, he somehow ened up on this island, after this all is explained in page 7 of comments(when it reaches this length)

Personality:He speaks with a British accent, he is happy though he will enter a bloodrage if he is severly injured, or if his loved ones are severly injured or killed, he likes hugs and will do his best to comfort someone if he can. Wil get depressed if one of his loved ones goes missing for a long period of time. He is a Foreteller, better known as a Seer, except h cant control the visions, and they will often foretell death. he is a minor telepath, he can transmit messages to oter creatures if he whipsers them.

Appearance:He is a Carmel colored fox with black paws and tail tip and ear tips, he is shorter than his twin, but much broader, his eyes are a dark, forest green. He smiles often, after a fight with a wild cat he has claw mark scars on his snout which have healed and the hair regrew since then, though they will show up if his face gets wet

Age:31

Occupation:Master Gunner

NAME: Crystal Shone (pronounced some weird way that I can't remember now.)

SPECIES: Fox

GENDER: Female

AGE: 'Bout 30

WEAPONS: A pair of stilettos, a rudius, and a blowpipe

PERSONALITY: Quiet most of the time. Had a shady and uncomfortable past but doesn't talk about it. Is nice when she does talk, and is apt to blush.

APPEARANCE: light brown fox with hazel eyes and a tuft of slightly darker fur (yeah, hair) on her head that falls over her eyes and hides them. Wears a leather tunic that's kinda boyish and a skirt that goes halfway down to her knees.

THEME SONG: Because of You (Kelly Clarkson), Beautiful Disaster (John McLaughin [c'mon, I know that isn't how you spell his name]), Behind These Hazel Eyes (Kelly Clarkson)

OCCUPATION: Doctor

Salm

Species: Weasel

Nickname: Salmy, but she'll most likely punch you.

Appearance: Dark furred with white flecks on her face. Has a nosering now and has multi colored hair. Wears a dress with a rip up the leg, so she can run. Wears a shirt that shows her belly an inch. Has a piech of wood that does through the flesh on her eye brow.

Weapons: Broadswords and daggers

Personality: Headstrong, and will snap at you for no reason at all.

Occupation: Will do multi jobs

History: She'll only tell you it if she trusts you

Age: 25

Name: Barktooth

Species: Ferret

Gender: Male

Appearance: Dark sable fur, hazel eyes, lean build

Weapons: Claymore, dirk

Occupation: First mate

Name: Cathbadh Boru

Species: Wolf

Nickname: Cath

Appearance: Silver fur like his father, King Silver

Weapons: A claymore with an ear-shaped hilt, two dirks, a war hammer, a spiked shield

Personality: Ruthless and determined

Occupation: Slaver

History: Second son of High King Silver of Hiberia, and was sent to serve with one of his father's old friends.

Shrapnel Toxin Jahk

Species: Sea Mink

Nickname: Jahk

Appearance: the fur around one of his eyes are black because of posion, he has a white stripe and black underbelly other than that he is brown

Weapons: two longswords, a double-sided war axe, and a star-made long dagger.

Personality: slightly gentle to those he likes, he is quite smart

Occupation: Capenter

History: his father is ''jack, he was found when they took the Stormshark. His mother was killed bye his grandfather, and after he left the stormshark with a bunch of other creatures (Cadbath?) he is now 16 and of actually warrior age (in jack's former country). He has other reasons for joining the crew than