Talk:The Story of Loamhedge/@comment-26879391-20151224153449

Interesting! It's quite similar to how Redwall was founded, really. Quite frankly, I find the parellels a bit too...obvious. I think the abbey warrior thing makes sense; Germaine did come from Loamhedge, so she would bring her traditions to Mossflower :3. Also, I might have missed it, but how did the actual abbey become built?

Also, I have my own speculations about the Abbey :D I might as well share them here:

Alright, so Sylvaticus (Often called Sylvy by friends and family), as well as Amyl lived in a small, desolate village. However, one day a pack of vermin theives came and ravaged the country-side. Luckily, Sylvy managed to save her sister, but Amyl would be forever crippled, since a vermin got to her earlier, and threw her brutaly against the wall.

The two sisters would live amongst themselves in solitude, occasionally meeting helpful creatures, who gave them food and shelter. (I'm going to incorperate some of your own lore into this, is that alright?) They came across one of One Eye's fortresses in a nile-like valley, which Sylvy instantly fell in love with. She wanted this land to be her and her sister's new home, but she couldn't, since One Eye did indeed receed in the fortress.

After meeting Vidar, Sylvy helped train the other woodlanders with him, while Amyl trained in healing. Finally, after a tremendous victory, Sylvy, along with Vidar and Ayl, decided to open up an Abbey named Loamhedge, for all the injured to recede in,

But other than that, your idea was really cool, Snow! I like how Vidar was originally an oarslave, and how he instead weiled a battle axes (Which are very cool, by the way). Furze is also a nice guy! Wonder how he is, if his little kingdom is still there or not. I also ike how One Eye was a subordinate of Jotunn, and his rise of power. Nice! (Also, do you think the name 'Loamhedge' originated from something?)