Talk:An Outcast's Cry/@comment-26538658-20150814230441

Great job! I like how you portrayed Veil as this Shakespearean-style "disappointment on one side, hated on the other" (which is a play on "burnt on one side, cold on the other") kind of character. He really seemed like he didn't quite know where or who he belonged to and even though he may have SEEMED like he wanted to be evil, he was really confused. KORW (Keep On Rewritin')