User blog comment:Rawfan56/Of Corsairs and Pirates/@comment-1222705-20101119165357/@comment-1222705-20101119194815

Hey Raw, I want to take Twilight out of this, and replace him with Aerothorn and I added Gallil. Here are their bios:

Name:Aerothorn Shadowbaen

Gender:Male

Species:Mink

Weapons:three blades that come out of his arms from between his knuckles on his hands, two long, sword blades that exit his arms from the top of his wrist,  a blades that exits from the tips of his fingers(like his claws), and a short blade that exits from his elbow facing backwards, two black longswords behind his back, a black longbow with black arrows, and two hidden blades on his vambraces

Appearance:Black hooded cloak, black tunic with muliple black leather wrapped over arms, black vambraces, steel chain mail tunic, two silver earrings in his left ear, two silver tail rings, and two gold arm rings on each arm, his eyes are red with snake like pupils

Age:Undetermined, though he is said to be older than the crew and ship's ages combined, it is rumered he had drank from the Fountain of Youth(or whatever it would be called in Redwall)

Backstory:He was born in an age long forgotten. He had the blades implanted into his arms against his will. After joining an underground group of assassins, he left after their rampaging holocausts got out of hand. After he left he was wondering through the desert and stumbled into a cave, where he had to fight a sidewinder. After defeating the snake he drank from a fountain in the back of the cave, he was 25 at this time and hasn't physicaly, or mentaly aged since.

Occupation:Lookout

And Now Gallil:

Name:Gallil Mossberg

Gender:Male

Species:Fox

Weapons:Katana, two sais, a primitave E-tool, and a baseball bat type club, plus a broadsword, a boarding ax and a ball and chain and dirk

Outfit:blood soaked headband(it is soaked with his Brother's blood, whom he knows lives, but had though was dead), clean black trench-coat, a dark gray shirt and a red, gold embroidered scarf which was given to him by another Fox Brood for helping defend them. He wears the scarf to cover a scar received from an arrow that went through his neck.

Back story:Twin older brother of Lock Uril-Galidur, he grew up in a Fox Brood, he left after his Brother was exiled, he wandered for a year before joining the Pheonix'  crew, where he met Crystal, Salm, Velvet, Jack and Sharrk, after he left or the crew was destroyed(not yet determined)he wandered another 12 years searching for his loved ones, he somehow ened up on this island, after this all is explained in page 7 of comments(when it reaches this length)

Personality:He speaks with a British accent, he is happy though he will enter a bloodrage if he is severly injured, or if his loved ones are severly injured or killed, he likes hugs and will do his best to comfort someone if he can. Wil get depressed if one of his loved ones goes missing for a long period of time. He is a Foreteller, better known as a Seer, except h cant control the visions, and they will often foretell death. he is a minor telepath, he can transmit messages to oter creatures if he whipsers them.

Appearance:He is a Carmel colored fox with black paws and tail tip and ear tips, he is shorter than his twin, but much broader, his eyes are a dark, forest green. He smiles often, after a fight with a wild cat he has claw mark scars on his snout which have healed and the hair regrew since then, though they will show up if his face gets wet

Occupation:Master Gunner