User blog:Denrael Sabretooth/Death and Darkness RPG

Note: This is my very first RPG. If there is anything I have done wrong, or if there is anything I can do to improve it, please let me know.

Story
The moon tints the forest an eerie light blue color. There is an evil presence looming over Mossflower Woods, yet it has not made itself known yet. No creatures, not even Seers, can predict when the presence will appear and why it is there. Creatures throughout the night sleep on, unaware of anything about them, thinking their thoughts, dreaming their dreams. But the time would come when the presence would make itself known... the time would come...

Rules
1. Follow the Redwall Wars Wiki Protocol.

2. No invincibility.

3. No godmodding. (Doing impossible things.)

4. No killing another player's character without that player's permission.

5. No insulting another player. (Insulting inside the RP is fine.)

6. Most important of all: Have fun!

Character Sheet
If you want to make a character in this RP, just post your character bio in the comments. Your bio requires:

1. Name.

2. Gender.

3. Species.

4. Appearance.

5. Clothes.

6. Personality.

7. Background/History.

8. Age (In seasons.)

Characters
Fretter Swordlance (Denrael)

Gender: Male

Species: Hare

Rank: Sergeant

Appearance: Swordlance has brown fur and hazel eyes.

Clothes: Swordlance wears the standard Long Patrol uniform, a long sleeved shirt with buttons and collars, and two pockets on his chest. He carries a belt with all his equipment, a canteen, pouches for food, and sheathes for his rapier and his dagger.

Personality: Swordlance is a toughened veteran hare of the Long Patrol, and he does not take lightly to vermin. He likes food, as all hares do, and he is trained in the art of battle with his sword.

Background/History: Swordlance was only 5 seasons old when his parents were slain by a vermin band, and the Long Patrol found him and raised him as their own. He grew up on Salamandastron, where he learned the ways of the warrior. He eventually rose up through the ranks to become a Sergeant, and he now leads the 32nd Division of the Long Patrol.

Age: 32 seasons

Armies
Ask permission if you'd like to make an army (ask me) or join one (ask the person owning the army).

32nd Division of the Long Patrol (Led by Sergeant Swordlance [Denrael].)