User blog comment:Skalarana/The Heartless/@comment-1427879-20110219083212

She's back! ''From outerspace. You just walked in now with that look upon your face''.

*Clears throat* 'Scuse me. Anyways, there are again several spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. For example once you wrote doing instead of going.

Wow, she just murdered her parents. The chapter breaks seem slightly random but I guess they work. So at the beginning of the update was that when she became forever heartless? Her soul died forever? It was a tad confusing. Did they think she died in the dungeon or when she disappeared? Well that was pretty good. KIU!