User blog:Lordsunflash/The Golden Veil

The great port of Sabord south of Salamandastron has stood as a haven for creatures longer than any can remember. But lately the cruel captain Lucius Barton has been stirring up rumours and bringing the port to the attention of pirates and corsairs from all around. riled up and ready to strike the crews await the order of Barton to strike the great port and its walls. Yet within Sabord They too have heard the rumours and their leader Aylen has prepared for what is to come: A war.

Rules
1) no invincibility! I think most people understand this. But with that being said you don't have to die.(when fighting someone leave them an out unless they are fine with dying)

2)All the normal rules apply(no swearing, personal insults, etc.)

3)maybe 3 characters max. I(Lordsunflash/Skorpia) may only have more because I might need a few extra to keep the story moving

4)no wolves. No offence to people that like them, I just don't think they belong in Redwall. Too big.(I may give an exception if you can convince me of it)

5)DON'T JUST MAKE A COMMENT THAT SAYS "I THINK I MIGHT JOIN THIS" IF YOU DON'T HAVE A CHARACTER YET SPEND THIS TIME TO THINK OF ONE.

6) No foreign language that is not in the least bit phonetic, and even then you must provide a translation and what language it is(Thorn I am looking at you) Put the translation in bold

7)If you are going to do anything big please talk to me about it. I want to keep track of all the stories people make on here so I can better keep it moving along.

Character Sheet
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Place of Origin:

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Personality:

Back story:

Age:

Lucius Barton
Titles: "Barton the Black", "Captain"

Species: Fox

Gender: Male

Weapons:Cutlass, hidden knife.

Personality: Polite and mannerly he is a gentlebeast at first glance, even so far as to being called a "teetotaler"(someone who does not drink alcohol). Yet under his calm facade he is a brutal murderer without regret and a lust for vengeance that will cause him to risk his life in pursuit of it. He is a cruel and merciless captain that has created agonizing and painful means of interrogation. In battle, he will often give enemies near mortal wounds so that they may see the face that killed them. Also extremely superstitious, he looks for omens and does one or two strange rituals to "ward off demons".

Appearance:Golden fur all along his body. Wears a white shirt and a barkcloth vest. Also has a line of stitches over his right eye.

History: Born on a merchant ship he was raised with manners and an attempted sense of good and bad. But when he was around 13 he was captured by a pirate ship and, through several skills he had learned, made into the navigator. He sailed aboard the ship for several seasons, following the crew on many raids and midnight attacks, through this he learned the ways of war, and the pleasure it brought to him. When his captain bit off more than he could chew and was killed in a raid upon Salamandastron Barton took control of the ship. Mere weeks later he captured a score of Long Patrol hares and avenged his captain, with terrifying results. They sailed for five seasons, plundering many towns, and sinking numerous ships.

Age: 25

Kling Steelrusk
Species: Ferret

Gender: Male

Age: 23 seasons

Weapons: broad scimitar and good ol' noosing rope. In battle, he is fiercely accurate with the rope, able to noose enemies from a far distance

Personality: Kling is usually a jolly fellow, and known for cracking jokes, even in the midst of a battle. He is fun to be around, and usually fooling around. He is very eager to do anything, always venturing into deep dark caves rather than be precautious. His attitude has made him become friends with many creatures, including woodlanders. However, many a creature also disrespect him because of his foolhardy behavior. He is never intimidated by the merciless and cruel, frightening disposition of most vermin leaders due to his attitude and disposition, which is sometimes seen as a strong quality in aspiring warlords

Appearance: His fur is the color of rust, but not completely. This rusty color travels in stripes down his body, with his underbelly completely white. He has little to no scars to show for, as he has not been in too many fierce battles, and he wears a white top with loosely hanging sleeves, along with a belt around the waist, into which his scimitar is placed

History: The values of the Steelrusk family had been carried on purposefully for generations until Kling was born. His parents were proud at the young Kling, always ready to try anything new and very enthusiastic. But once he became more independent, things began to change, as happens in all adolescents. He turned out a disgrace to his family name and decided to become fully independent, leaving his household and joining the forces of Lucius Barton, corsair captain.

Affiliation: High Rank under the command of Captain Lucius Barton

Corbus Quick-blade
Gender: Male

Eye color: brown

Species: Ferret

Place of Origin: Black Cod Bay, Arundell

Appearance: Is missing his left eye after the battle, it is covered by a patch with a green leaf sewn into it. Rather small he is also a little muscular and very well built for his size. He often wears a steel breastplate and a bag that contains all he travels with. Has brown fur.

Weapons: Scimitar, Dirk, Buckler(sometimes)

Personality: Always looking for an alternative strategy if others have failed, he will look at a battle from afar. He is also chivalrous and has respect and honour for himself and others. He is also rather quiet around all but close friends, and is hard to make new allies, but as soon as they are on his side he is loyal to the death for them.

Backstory: Was born the son of the chief of the Akila, a secretive tribe in the land of Arundell. His mother was killed by a snake when he was young and his father went out and killed it in revenge. He was always the younger sibling who was ignored by his father due to his brother's talents. One day one of his brother's thugs decided to fight Corbus, at this Corbus showed what many seasons of secret self-trained had done. He won the fight, and the admiration of his father and friends. A few short seasons afterwards he was a prominent member of the tribe, serving on many missions his father had put him on. But on a summer day his father was killed by his own brother, and dueled Corbus for the leadership of the tribe. unbeknown to Corbus his blade had been sabotaged that night, and he was brutally defeated in battle, only saved by his close friend and companion, Durb. He traveled around for quite a few seasons and realized the wrongs he had done during his time in the tribe and has since done his best to right them.

Relationships: A friend of Guenon, Jak Ceader, Durb, and Renar Falcon-scourge

Family: Tabun(Father) Zann(Brother) Sawney Rath(in Redwall, Nephew)