User blog comment:Silverfalcon Pikehawk/Legacy/@comment-1399757-20120605025457

I'm not very much a fan of reading stories on the computer, mainly because my eyes hurt when I read them late at night like this, but to put into perspective how well you put this together, I ignored my physical premonitions because I was so drawn into that intro, enough that I even read the first chapter in addition to the prologue. Love the intro and the first-person style!